EXPOSITION TEXT
Thesis : Today, I heard the news that the police have aressted Bjorka.I don't think the man that the police have aressted is Bjorka because he doesn't have a computer. I strongly believe that people who don't have a computer can do hacking activity.
Argument 1 : In my opinion it's better if the police be silent, and examine the data that will be processed propely.
Although the police have tried to find the suspected people but they must be careful in acting and prevent mistakes cluring arrest.
Argument 2 : According to the news, Indonesia has a little understanding about hacker
Consequently, people who read the news are provoked by the information that is not valid
Reiteration : So in the future, try to be more careful in making an arrest
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